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| Atropa Belladonna87 2007-08-24 ch 1, | abusethis is one of the best poems i have read on this website or anywehre for that matter. it's extremely sad and extremely expressive. i loved the flow of the story in the poem. excellent work really and i'm off to see some more of your work. :D |
| Faith Adeline 2007-05-29 ch 1, | abuseI liked it. But I think you should cut it down a little, it just seemed really long. Maybe that was just me. But, overall it was a good poem :) Faith |
| Vesta J 2007-05-29 ch 1, | abuseI like how you dramatized the importance of the relationship. To everyone else, it would be nothing. To her, it was everything. |
| InViSiBlE wOmAn 2007-05-29 ch 1, | abuseOMG THAT WAS SO GOOD! It was beautiful and sad and excellently written, it was great! |