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Reviews For: Suicide Notes and Butterfly Kisses

Atropa Belladonna87
2007-08-24
ch 1,
abusethis is one of the best poems i have read on this website or anywehre for that matter. it's extremely sad and extremely expressive. i loved the flow of the story in the poem. excellent work really and i'm off to see some more of your work. :D
Faith Adeline
2007-05-29
ch 1,
abuseI liked it. But I think you should cut it down a little, it just seemed really long. Maybe that was just me. But, overall it was a good poem :)
Faith
Vesta J
2007-05-29
ch 1,
abuseI like how you dramatized the importance of the relationship. To everyone else, it would be nothing. To her, it was everything.
InViSiBlE wOmAn
2007-05-29
ch 1,
abuseOMG THAT WAS SO GOOD! It was beautiful and sad and excellently written, it was great!
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