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| .following.black.doves. 2007-12-04 ch 1,   | homgsh its so awesome. totally AWESOME =] kudos. srz |
| concerto49 2007-08-18 ch 1, | We often do act on impulses and don't think of our consequences in doing so. No one can be god. We can't exactly control life can we? Hm, we should think before we act. Cool. Cheers. |
| rouquinamour 2007-07-20 ch 1, | hmm... very interesting... I like the rhyme scene... Btw, thanks for commenting on my story too! |
| hopelesslyxdeluded 2007-06-24 ch 1, | Hmm... very optimistic. :D |
| say this sooner 2007-06-22 ch 1, | wow, great messege. i loved it. beautiful work! |
| ihrtbks 2007-06-10 ch 1, | Wow. This is so deep. I really like it. GREAT JOB! |
| Susan Holt 2007-06-10 ch 1, | Hey Lavinya Rose! I just read your poem and although I don't know a lot of things about poetry and cannot comment on the style etc., I do know that it was a piece full of sentiment. I loved the way you used the words in it and the title. |
| flashlitdarknessxx 2007-06-06 ch 1, | Thank You! for the review on my poem. I really like this poem! It says a lot! Great job! |
| Kissing Concrete 2007-06-04 ch 1, | WOW- i really like it. it really gets your message across and shows how much you despise violence. i really like your message and your words really seem to flow well together... keep writing!! |
| Mark Joseph 2007-06-03 ch 1, | I need to memorize this for the next time someone holds a gun to me, becuase, that happens all the time... I liked it, good job. M a r k |
| mz intoxicating 2007-06-02 ch 1, | "i'm lovin it" =P Really nice and thoughtful!! |
| Lost in A World of Pain 2007-06-01 ch 1, | This is a very interesting poem. I don't believe that I've ever read one where advice is given to another person other than self advice or condemnation to the author. Which is also interesting because this poem seems to be an expression of what might happen in the world. One key characteristic regarding poems is that many authors on this site reveal deep raw inner emotions that are related to them to write the poem. A characteristic which I will admit to being guilty of. This is a refreshing contrast to the majority of poems on this site and I applaude your effots. Well done! Oh, and thanks for reviewing my attempt at a song. It really made my day. Thanks! Cheers Lost in A World of Pain |
| Vesta J 2007-05-29 ch 1, | hey this is your poem I read a few days ago :D I love this. Of course, anything by you is awesome ;) But it's just the part "a friend or lover" the friend part doesn't really make sense because you said it afterward. But I like ;) |