I thought you would focus on Giuliani's political views and how he may lead the country, solve Iraq, etc., but instead this is all about 9/11 with some stuff about his crime record.

As the previous reviewer stated, the essay doesn't flow well for some reason.

It's a difficult read, and I can't put my finger on why. It just doesn't flow. I can see your passion, but not grasp it from your words.