Reviews for Love is a Maze of Greek Gods

Reviews For: Love is a Maze of Greek Gods

Miz Em 2008-01-16 ch 1,	This sounds cool, are you planning to continue it? Seems like a hard place to get started at, like where do you go from there? But an awesome start!
GreyRibbon 2007-10-12 ch 1,	Well, you've definitely got me interested! Can't wait to see how this turns out :)
purplemilkshake 2007-06-27 ch 1,	GREAT IDEA SO FAR! carry on carry on carry on carry on x
kstar129 2007-06-26 ch 1,	Really good!I LOVE Greek mythology!If you happen to ever need help ona particular god/goddess I can help!Anyway make more SOON!
RisanF 2007-06-15 ch 1,	Interesting in that this person thinks of herself as an outcast, yet the reason she doesn't exist is because nothing around her exists; she is just a shade in a dream, viewing the dream like many dreamers do. I think it would do your story well to concentrate on this strange contrast your character is experiencing; it has that weird Twilight Zone feel. Still, I wonder if you should use the term firing of a 'servent,' since people in the U.S. don't really use the word 'servent' often, making it harder to relate this to modern U.S. society. (unless you don't live in the U.S.?) And really, I don't know if we need to hear about the carved-up corpse with eyeballs hanging out. :P Still, nicely done.
astrum 2007-06-11 ch 1,	This is really intrigueing and really good. I want to know what happens next and I can't wait for this story to really get started. You have a real talent I can tell already. So update soon because I'm really interested now! :P
criti-sized 2007-06-10 ch 1,	There isn't much that I tell you about this just yet. It seems to me that it's on it's way to becoming a great story as long as you continue it. Again, I liked the slight description that you had in it, the evasive way that you explained it while also being able to strike up curiosity. If you update this, I'll read it.
Wicca Girl 2007-06-10 ch 1,	wow. Mysterious. Im curious what will happen next Update asap!
keyko101 2007-06-06 ch 1,	This is a really short prologue that I have ever read, to be honest. Would you believe me if I said that I don't have that many dreams nowadays? "For sixteen years I dreamt; of a world in which I could see everything, but no-one could see me. A world which I was free in; where I had no restrictions. I could go anywhere; everywhere. But I was alone." This actually reminds me of that song by Susan Vega (Tom's Diner). It's like you see just about everything, but you can't really say anything... Or like watching a movie. Depending on how you think of it. "Unlike a play, they never stopped but just carried on." This is my favourite line right here. It's like saying something like 'the story never ends until my last breath', but less lame. I wasn't a big Greek buff though... which story did you get the inspiration from? This is interesting, I do hope you continue this story. 'Cause the only thing I know is that the main character is around 16-17.
Thankz-For-The-Memoriez 2007-06-04 ch 1,	AMAZING! lool u shud soo make this in2 a story it wud get so mcuh reviews! go u! luff yaah loaadz x
JaneBarrie 2007-06-01 ch 1,	Even though it was probably one of the shortest prologue's I have ever read, it caught my attention. One question however: About the fifth paragraph when she says she couldn't even see herself, does that mean she is really invisible or what? It's a little confusing, but the prologue is definitely eye catching! Fabulous job. Keep it up! -Jane

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