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| Carmel March 2007-09-23 ch 9,   | Okay, so I've been the worst reviewer in the history of reviewers. I'm so sorry for taking so long! This story is still as good as ever. Even if I haven't read it in awhile, the minute I read a few paragraphs, it all comes back to me; the characters, the plot, the style of writing, everything. It takes an amazing story, and not to mention, author, to do that :) Keep this up, and update soon! ~Carm~ |
| soojinyeh 2007-09-21 ch 1, | I need to read Washed away. love it. Read and review me please. |
| Phillipe De'Longe 2007-09-18 ch 9, | Glad you finally got them back together.. lol, and like how you worked Bree and Lizzy in there. |
| FortheloveofCorgis 2007-09-18 ch 1, | I loved it, please update soon |
| Taraum 2007-09-17 ch 9, | It's good to see that they are back together. Although I do think that CC overreacted about Dougal. Nice job with this. Please update, soon. |
| Taraum 2007-09-17 ch 8, | I hope Alexa knows what she's doing. Although CC is being a royal pain in the neck. *falls over laughing* I can't believe that Tara is such a bad cook! I can't really say that I have had better luck than she does. |
| Carmel March 2007-09-16 ch 8, | I'm so glad I actually found the time to read this. Amazing job! I love how everything is developing more and more, making this a real story story. Not sure if that makes sense, but you know what I mean :) Loved it, and I can't wait for more! ~Carm~ |
| Volurin 2007-09-04 ch 1, | Sorry, I'm using your review system as a way to contact you. I will get around to reading this eventually but I'm a little busy at the moment. I am sending this message to everyone whom it concerns. Blood Pendant is being deleted. |
| Phillipe De'Longe 2007-08-30 ch 7, | Hey give CC a break, He just cares about her, and some other dog is trying to hunt on his territory... |
| Taraum 2007-07-25 ch 7, | Loved the new chapter. Man, CC really reacted badly. Of course, maybe it's just because he doesn't want to lose "his" woman, but I still think he overdid it. Nice job; very believable. |
| Carmel March 2007-07-25 ch 7, | Lovely, lovely chapter. I liked that last line there :) The words in italics are a nice, original touch. Can't wait to see where you go with this! ~carm~ |
| Carmel March 2007-07-22 ch 6, | I read Washed Away and loved it, so I decided to read the sequel as well. It's wonderful so far. You've developed the characters to a perfect point, where there is still some mystery to them but we still feel like we know them. The storyline is clever and quite gripping, different from Washed Away, yet sort of similar. The writing is absolutely wonderful, very flowing. All in all, great job on this, and I can't wait for more :) ~carm~ |
| Taraum 2007-07-10 ch 6, | Ok, very nice chapter. I like the beginning of this whole conflict with CC, Alexa, and Dougal. It should be interesting to see how it turns out. And whoever it was that vandalized this house. Please, update so people can figure it out. |
| Taraum 2007-07-02 ch 5, | He toilet papered his trees?! *laughs* Only CC could do something so childish and yet still keep Alexa from hurting him. And it is interesting to see how the men reacted to the ever-famous "Jim Craig" syndrom that seems to come onto women once they see that movie. All in all, nice job on this chapter. It is also intriguing about this strange man that killed Godfrey Davis. I wonder why he was having to pay him... |
| Taraum 2007-06-19 ch 4, | *uses pillow to cover excited squeal* Okay, just know that I LOVE the part with Liam in it. I didn't know if you could actually pull off something that would make me squeal in delight; but congrats, my dear beta, you did! Also, I am a little worried about this "talk" CC intends to have with Dougal. |