The ending was nice, I think. Whew, you stanzas are long!

-Ramen

I think I understood most of it.

Really emotional.

Rowan.

the pacing in this one is intense. my mind couldn't keep up with as fast as my eyes wanted to read. i liked it. keep writing.

There was a lot of emotion to that poem.

SirScott

Amazing

"So I started with something

Somewhat like innocence and

Ended up with an empty kiss that

Left my lips on fire"

Its just really amazing. I loved it.

I love this poem...it is revealing and real, there is something about it that gets me emotionally in this.

Gah, the first few lines in the third verse just completely break my heart. This is just amazing. Take care.