w00t
saw this one at study. :)
good work yo!

That's short and pretty creepy. The last line fit really well with the whole rhythm and flow, which is really great. The beginning was kind of a bit predictable, but then the ending was good. I don't quite get the whole "blue" thing (eyes?), and you sort of over-used the "colours bleeding" line, but overall it's good. It left a strong impression on me, mostly because you ended it well.