m...poetic, intellectual goodness...yummy. this sounds a bit like a speech of some sort, something a dreamy leader would give to his/her followers at a sit in. i liked it. the message is good, excuse me, fucking wonderful, and it is well protrayed in this piece. good job.

Very good, i actually think this has heaps of substance, and hey i actually finally read something of yours. Dont you love me.

Idiots Anonymous. Join the Club.
Okay, there is a problem I saw. Maybe you don't consider it a problem but I'm the reviewer so.. Whatever. Back to what I was saying. A lot of the lines start out the same. You may have done it on purpose, people do, but it's not appealing to me. I could see one or two lines but people on here take it to the extreme. More than Words, ha ha. Ok..Maybe it's time for a coffee break.