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| RubyRedRapture 2007-07-15 ch 1,   | ooh i like this! the style is really cool and leaves for a sense of mystery in the middle of the piece. very nice!! |
| QueenVixta 2007-06-07 ch 1, | It's good to see you back here! Great poem, I liked it a lot. My favourite lines were these: Listen Baby Our verses are broken Chorus jumbled Meaning, unspoken Great piece, hope to read more from you soon! {V} |