|Reviews for What We Leave|
| Eil 4/4/10 . chapter 1
Best of luck with your application!
I'm adding this story to my alert list so I'll know when it's up again... hope it won't take too long. :)
| unmotivated.sap 12/10/09 . chapter 1
that was the most incredible piece i've ever read on here on fp.
| Irish Eyes 63 10/4/09 . chapter 1
I have tears in my eyes. What. The. HELL!
God this was so incredibly heartbreaking and wonderful. I cannot believe that something like THIS could have been written.
I really need to sob right now. This...just no. NO.
I feel as though I nned to go do something in my life right now. This story inspired me, and somehow, this story will always be a reminder that the most special people to us will die when we don't expect it.
I hate you. So much. Not in a literal sense of course, just you know...the saddness that this story has. I haven't cried over a story for a while and I'm glad that this was the one...
And away we fly...
| xoVanilla-Bean 9/12/09 . chapter 1
I think my heart ripped and is beating on the floor.
And I have no words to let you know how gorgeous this is. Or how happy I am that I've found it, because it's one of those stories that I can go back to, and read and grasp something different from it each time.
I loved the unrequited-almost-requited. It was unbalanced but balanced at the same time. And the symbolism of the bike, which was made of awesome.
And she died and left the bike. It's perfect.
| spinelesslysweet 5/3/09 . chapter 1
OMG! this was so touching and so beautiful! i just finished reading it and i actually have tears in my eyes, i feel so bad for jacob! thanks for sharing, this was truly very nice :)
| blurrylights 2/28/09 . chapter 1
This was so beautiful...I feel like I'm going to cry.
| FerretsRevolution 11/12/08 . chapter 1
This whole story/one-shot was so completely heartfelt. I almost broke down into tears, especially at the last paragraph...Excellent job...
| strawberrie0 8/4/08 . chapter 1
| watermelon.smile 7/20/08 . chapter 1
that was so beautiful and moving... I'm at a loss of words. Thank you for writing this.
| Unsociably Acceptable 7/13/08 . chapter 1
that's so SAD
and so SWEET
and so 'AW' worthy!
| skydancersrule 7/11/08 . chapter 1
Elegant, direct, moving. I loved it. Definitely one of the best things I've ever read. Thanks. (:
| Le Meg 7/10/08 . chapter 1
| x3life 7/8/08 . chapter 1
aw this was kinda depressing (
but yet really well written
| Lily Llynn 7/8/08 . chapter 1
It's definitely an unconventional romance, and it's also beautifully written prose. I really like this, as sad and heartbreaking and hurtful (to him, and sometimes to her), this is. I'm going to add this to my c2. (:
| seventhchords 6/20/07 . chapter 1
I liked how you narrated the whole story in such a real, believable way. Somehow reading this gave me a nice sense of nostalgia as well. Very well-written piece. Good work!