Best of luck with your application!

I'm adding this story to my alert list so I'll know when it's up again... hope it won't take too long. :)

that was the most incredible piece i've ever read on here on fp.

simply amazing.

I have tears in my eyes. What. The. HELL!

God this was so incredibly heartbreaking and wonderful. I cannot believe that something like THIS could have been written.

I really need to sob right now. This...just no. NO.

I feel as though I nned to go do something in my life right now. This story inspired me, and somehow, this story will always be a reminder that the most special people to us will die when we don't expect it.

I hate you. So much. Not in a literal sense of course, just you know...the saddness that this story has. I haven't cried over a story for a while and I'm glad that this was the one...

And away we fly...

I think my heart ripped and is beating on the floor.

And I have no words to let you know how gorgeous this is. Or how happy I am that I've found it, because it's one of those stories that I can go back to, and read and grasp something different from it each time.

I loved the unrequited-almost-requited. It was unbalanced but balanced at the same time. And the symbolism of the bike, which was made of awesome.

And she died and left the bike. It's perfect.

Thank you.

OMG! this was so touching and so beautiful! i just finished reading it and i actually have tears in my eyes, i feel so bad for jacob! thanks for sharing, this was truly very nice :)

This was so beautiful...I feel like I'm going to cry.

This whole story/one-shot was so completely heartfelt. I almost broke down into tears, especially at the last paragraph...Excellent job...

I cried.

:)

that was so beautiful and moving... I'm at a loss of words. Thank you for writing this.

that's so SAD

and so SWEET

and so 'AW' worthy!

*wipes tears*

:)

Elegant, direct, moving. I loved it. Definitely one of the best things I've ever read. Thanks. (:

Absolutely beautiful.

aw this was kinda depressing (

but yet really well written

It's definitely an unconventional romance, and it's also beautifully written prose. I really like this, as sad and heartbreaking and hurtful (to him, and sometimes to her), this is. I'm going to add this to my c2. (:

I liked how you narrated the whole story in such a real, believable way. Somehow reading this gave me a nice sense of nostalgia as well. Very well-written piece. Good work!