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| Twilight Starr 2007-11-10 ch 1,  | abuseGreat poem. One line that really got me was "under your unblinking stare, as you count the bodies of abram’s nations like stars". It was very descriptive and used good comparisons. Well done. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Kissing Concrete 2007-06-01 ch 1, | abusei like it- a lot as you reviewed mine, i'll review yours: only death may avenge death, and where the world began with light, it may still end in shadows I loved those lines, they stayed true to the old saying "an eye for an eye", but afterwards comes to mind the Gandhi quote "an eye for an eye makes the whole world blind". very good job- nice bible references and questioning of the reality of religion and how we are destroying our world. |