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GAME OVER
Tytherpol
6/1/07 . chapter 1
this is really good,
but "Falling into bottomless pits,/it's all becoming darker."
kind of makes it sound cheaper than it should, to me at least.
good job, though-
i lie the rest of it.
cool concept.