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Tytherpol
2007-06-01
ch 1, 		abusethis is really good,
but "Falling into bottomless pits,/it's all becoming darker."
kind of makes it sound cheaper than it should, to me at least.
good job, though--
i lie the rest of it.
cool concept.
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