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theinfinitebee
2008-06-20
ch 1,
abuseI hadn't read this before echoes, but I love it so much I'm adding it to my favourites.

The first line is brilliant.
"i'm trapped in an ivory tower of my own design" = love the image.
I'm sitting here struggling to find a line that I like the most but I can't; everything speaks out to me at once.

I feel the same way entirely too often...frustration at masses of America for being so shallow or close-minded.

Amazing. I'll never know how you come up with this stuff.
Twilight Starr
2007-11-10
ch 1,
abuseAwesome poem. My favorite line is "that they've lost the art of reading between the lines (except for enemy ones)" because it seems some people just can't read between the lines these days. Well done.

~Twilight Starr~
Maisha Mafuriko
2007-05-30
ch 1,
abuseGotta say this writing of yours...awesome

Such style and deeper meanings to contemplate.

Excellant!
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