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theinfinitebee
2008-06-20
ch 1,
abuseOut of pure curiousity, what's your favourite colour? Mine's blue.
Question prompted from the first line.

You said in your dA journal, "I don't call myself a poet, though I dream of being one." If I'm interpreting things correctly, that's radiating through this poem.

My favourite line has to be the first one, though I like all of it.
I love the title, by the way.
perpetual questions
2008-03-31
ch 1,
abusewonderful imagery and feeling behind this. the last line really ends the piece perfectly.
Twilight Starr
2007-11-10
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful poem. :D

~Twilight Starr~
say this sooner
2007-09-02
ch 1,
abusebeautiful imagery and fantastic word choice. great work!
Kissing Concrete
2007-06-04
ch 1,
abusereally good imagery- i love the phrase "if i could, i'd paint this world blue"- so beautiful!! keep writing
Zeurpiet
2007-06-01
ch 1,
abuseWow, this produces such beautiful imagery. Truly wonderful.
EyesEmphatic
2007-05-30
ch 1,
abuse"casting a fluorescent shadow on the indigo sun"

What a great line. I like this :)
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