enchanting.

i especially love the second line.

favorite.

Speechless.

I added this to my favorite stories.

Out of pure curiousity, what's your favourite colour? Mine's blue.

Question prompted from the first line.

You said in your dA journal, "I don't call myself a poet, though I dream of being one." If I'm interpreting things correctly, that's radiating through this poem.

My favourite line has to be the first one, though I like all of it.

I love the title, by the way.

wonderful imagery and feeling behind this. the last line really ends the piece perfectly.

Beautiful poem. :D

Twilight Starr

beautiful imagery and fantastic word choice. great work!

really good imagery- i love the phrase "if i could, i'd paint this world blue"- so beautiful! keep writing

Wow, this produces such beautiful imagery. Truly wonderful.

"casting a fluorescent shadow on the indigo sun"

What a great line. I like this :)