|Reviews for watercolor days|
| young and the reckless 10/12/10 . chapter 1
i especially love the second line.
| tonight we bloom 7/9/09 . chapter 1
I added this to my favorite stories.
| theinfinitebee 6/20/08 . chapter 1
Out of pure curiousity, what's your favourite colour? Mine's blue.
Question prompted from the first line.
You said in your dA journal, "I don't call myself a poet, though I dream of being one." If I'm interpreting things correctly, that's radiating through this poem.
My favourite line has to be the first one, though I like all of it.
I love the title, by the way.
| a silenced revolution 3/31/08 . chapter 1
wonderful imagery and feeling behind this. the last line really ends the piece perfectly.
| Twilight Starr 11/10/07 . chapter 1
Beautiful poem. :D
| continuous brevity 9/2/07 . chapter 1
beautiful imagery and fantastic word choice. great work!
| Kissing Concrete 6/4/07 . chapter 1
really good imagery- i love the phrase "if i could, i'd paint this world blue"- so beautiful! keep writing
| Zeurpiet 6/1/07 . chapter 1
Wow, this produces such beautiful imagery. Truly wonderful.
| EyesEmphatic 5/30/07 . chapter 1
"casting a fluorescent shadow on the indigo sun"
What a great line. I like this :)