| Reviews for watercolor days |
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young and the reckless 10/12/10 . chapter 1enchanting. i especially love the second line. favorite. |
tonight we bloom 7/9/09 . chapter 1Speechless. I added this to my favorite stories. |
theinfinitebee 6/20/08 . chapter 1Out of pure curiousity, what's your favourite colour? Mine's blue. Question prompted from the first line. You said in your dA journal, "I don't call myself a poet, though I dream of being one." If I'm interpreting things correctly, that's radiating through this poem. My favourite line has to be the first one, though I like all of it. I love the title, by the way. |
a silenced revolution 3/31/08 . chapter 1wonderful imagery and feeling behind this. the last line really ends the piece perfectly. |
Twilight Starr 11/10/07 . chapter 1Beautiful poem. :D Twilight Starr |
continuous brevity 9/2/07 . chapter 1beautiful imagery and fantastic word choice. great work! |
Kissing Concrete 6/4/07 . chapter 1really good imagery- i love the phrase "if i could, i'd paint this world blue"- so beautiful! keep writing |
Zeurpiet 6/1/07 . chapter 1Wow, this produces such beautiful imagery. Truly wonderful. |
EyesEmphatic 5/30/07 . chapter 1"casting a fluorescent shadow on the indigo sun" What a great line. I like this :) |