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| theinfinitebee 2008-06-20 ch 1,  | abuseOut of pure curiousity, what's your favourite colour? Mine's blue. Question prompted from the first line. You said in your dA journal, "I don't call myself a poet, though I dream of being one." If I'm interpreting things correctly, that's radiating through this poem. My favourite line has to be the first one, though I like all of it. I love the title, by the way. |
| perpetual questions 2008-03-31 ch 1, | abusewonderful imagery and feeling behind this. the last line really ends the piece perfectly. |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-10 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful poem. :D ~Twilight Starr~ |
| say this sooner 2007-09-02 ch 1, | abusebeautiful imagery and fantastic word choice. great work! |
| Kissing Concrete 2007-06-04 ch 1, | abusereally good imagery- i love the phrase "if i could, i'd paint this world blue"- so beautiful!! keep writing |
| Zeurpiet 2007-06-01 ch 1, | abuseWow, this produces such beautiful imagery. Truly wonderful. |
| EyesEmphatic 2007-05-30 ch 1, | abuse"casting a fluorescent shadow on the indigo sun" What a great line. I like this :) |