I can't stop laughing. This is great!!

Oh you're great! A delightful and funny analysis that no English teacher would ever read... or a least admit to reading. We've been studying epics and epic conventions, but I think you must have taught me a lot more. I remember humor better, after all. Thank you so much! You made me laugh the whole time, and there's not a lot that makes me laugh out loud.

Just to point one thing out - a redneck probably would intend a racial comment. I go to a school filled with them, so I know. Spitting and scratching could stand to be added in as well.

This is so sad but so funny. I love it so far! Kudos for you. I especially like the way it's mostly comprised of the author think of how the beat writer's block... come on, we all know that feeling!

Redneck+Writing urge= Crappy story.
You're doing great, The redneck sucks.
WBW

hehe this was even funnier than the first chapter. i have to get my brother to read this...

"Everybody knows that black equals EVIL. (No racial comment intended." brilliant. like orbit white!

yes, fuck you peter pan.

this was amazing. favorite time!! *has small fiesta and clicks on the "add story to my favortie stories list" button.

omg, this is the shit. o.O

LMAO!

Afrotastic. (Awesome.)

'Steve followed warily, worried at the homosexical undertones.'

I have two words for you;

EPIC. WIN.

woah!! I can literally hear a red-neck behind me! wait that's Lyn. Any how this shits good a=enough to go wide. I wissh you would make chapter three.

Alright, this is good. I smirked my way through most of it, spending the other times laughing, chortling and gaffawing in that order.
The last line of your recent update is a real winner. As is the name Steve. Oh, and Armstumps Johanson. Please bring him into the action as soon as possible.
The inner redneck that is inside all of us is finally finding its voice in this here story. I can't believe I didn't read this earlier. Keep it up.

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haha love it!! you're the shit!