Ha... Lordy, I've had days like these... thanks - Miran

I'm sorry but this chapter wasn't so hot. I lost the vibe I had before. Maybe you can amp it in the next. If there is a next.

eerm...

I find your stereotype of rednecks rather rude, but I think youve got potential, although at the moment there isn't too much plot in the story...

Keep it up!

very good, very funny, and very interesting. ah, this, ladies and gentlemen who read this, is what it's like inside an ordinary writer's mind. lol

Ye gods. The shot of cold reality in this just gave me a shiver.

Pretty good, but the redneckery slips a bit too much. And how does a redneck know "inaudibly"? It's four syllables, that should be an impossible feat. D

This is so funny. The first chapter reminded of me when I was 12 and wrote my Tomb Raider rip off.

Git-'er-done!

“In the Latter Age, in the far off lands of Zarnia, a young half-elf, half-dragon farm boy was about to leave his dreary existence behind and embark on the adventure of a lifetime…only he didn’t know it yet. Behold the legendary tale of Steve!”

this is awsome! hell funny

Dude, this is so amazing that I hear the accent while reading. I hear the redneckedness. I hate epic fantasies, and it's great to see them thoroughly bashed. Plus your writing skills are purty as heck.

-Fever

One word:

FUNNY!

Update soon!

THANK you!

FINALLY someone made fun of all this shit that is over-used ideas.

No one I have seen has used an EVIL protaginist.

Very few have a protaginist in black. It's always the ANTAGONIST because darkness isn't calming and the most natural force out there, since unlike light, darkness has NO source, NO darkness is just evil and scary!

Lol, that was funny, i'll go look for chapter 2, thats if it came out already

I believe HE agrees that he's retarded

You thought outside the box for this one and this ain't a bad idea. Great work! I mean this was really original and funny. I can see you have skills so write something awesome with your power. This is the best one I have read all day and compared to the others, yours kicked ass. Man, I dissed up someone's story so bad just now that the person took it off the moment after. Keep writing in the name of your passion and imagination.