oh gosh lol the last line made me DIE laughing
XD

HAHAH oh god that was ABSOLUTELY the best thing i've read this weekend. Brilliant!

Double meaning much. Love it. And Sexton is so spastic. ADD anyone? LOL. Love it. Cute, pointless, and lots of awesome.

aw, thats such a cute story. i wish i had read it earlier.

Ha.. and came out of the closet.

I get it. I'm not dumb.

That was funny

I love it. It was amusing and kind of sexy at the same time (well, with Sexton there how could it not be?), and it was really interesting that you dealt with such a serious subject as religion in such a light story. And not only religion, you even dealt with terrorism. How did you manage to keep your story so light with subjects as polemic as those ?
Your characters are great, and Jacob's thoughts, interrogations and worries seem real. Nothing seemed unbelievable in your story, and I think that every emotion you wanted to convey did pass through me.
I would say that this story deserves an A+.
Thank you for it.

great lil story there :) me likes how they got all worked up for nothing hehe

ahahahahahhahahahah heheheheheh *giggle giggle* I loved that...the last line can only be described by one word...perfect! hah this was awesome i really liked it!


~silent

lmao XD! "Jacob grasped Sexton’s hand and finally came out of the closet." Seen that coming
i loved it

I like the fairytale feeling that the narrator's voice provides.
I also like the double meaning of the last line. Cute story.

Omg I love this so much it's so freakin funny and I love the name Sexton hahaha it's my new favourite name ever now and the ending was just as great loves it

Aww, so cute! Nice ending! XD Loved it.

I loved it!! I just want to eat sexton up yummeh. I love his name! This story was so sexy.


I loved the last sentance...lmao

ahaha i loved this. the last line was perfection :]

How...delightfully random!