wah! :-(

I love simple beauty, and you appear to have mastered it. With so few words you evoke so many feelings.

Very simple, but eloquent in being so. Nice.

Reminds me of "November Rain" by Guns 'N' Roses. But that's only becaust it's in the title. I can't listen to 6 minute guitar solos. I like the drums. Can't you tell from my name? Anyhow.. Yes. You could probably rewrite this and make it better. Some of the rhymes were a little predictable, a little boring. Okay, I really just don't like the start. Dark and park. but anyhow.. You're the poet and we all have those moments. Chatterbox. .