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| D's Silly G 2008-07-03 ch 4,  | abuseoh my funny that was Great! awesome story, love it! |
| Miss. Paradox 2008-06-16 ch 4, | abuseI honestly can't remember the last time I laughed so hard reading something on here. AND not only was it hilarious but the writing kicks ** which is a lot more than I can say for a lot of the stories on here. So, basically, great job. I only wish it were a bit longer, haha. I want more Mason and Jake: they're hilarious. |
| TheNarglesWillEatYou 2008-03-28 ch 4, | abusethat's ** hilarious! all of it. that was really great. i love Cody, he's such an idiot while being extremely hot at the same time. though i do love Mason's hair. |
| i-see-faeries 2008-03-14 ch 4, | abuseIt's funny, I read this years ago. I guess I found it again. LOL. I love this. It's so amusing. I love Jake and Mason. And Phillip and Cody are so akward it's adorable. Love this. |
| Sabe 2008-03-11 ch 4, | abuseHee, this was a fun story. The dialogue between the characters is great. :) |
| Naomi Schemer 2007-08-05 ch 4, | abuseThis reminded me a lot of MTV's Undressed. That's not really a bad thing...I definitely prefer the show without the ** background music. It's a nice break from all the long complicated stories out there. Short and to the point, as it should be, I say. Thanks for posting it. |
| LadyFalcone 2007-07-22 ch 4, | abuseMore I nee more |
| Back of Beyond 2007-07-07 ch 4, | abuseVery good story ^^ It was hilarious to read, and a good break from all those other angsty stories I've been reading :P |
| fivestar ice 2007-06-24 ch 4, | abuselol! that was ** awesome. I love Mason |
| Esquirella 2007-06-18 ch 4, | abuseThat was an AWESOME ending! |
| magalina 2007-06-17 ch 4, | abuselol That was great. Amazing story, loved it :D |
| Amindaya 2007-06-16 ch 4, | abuseWell, I think it was a good way to end it...although I thought it would be longer than it was. :/ I'll be looking forward to more stories from you. :D |
| Kaysin 2007-06-16 ch 4, | abuseI did like this story, and I'm glad you didn't drag it out. Perfect timing, really. There were lots of funny moments, and the interactions were hot! ^^ Just one thing - the personalities of the two pairings were sort of similiar. Jake and Mason acted the same, and Philip and Cody acted the same. The personalities needed to be varied slightly. Despite that, I really enjoyed your story, and since you were going for light-hearted, you did it well. I'm looking forward to whatever you write next! |
| Midnights Scream 2007-06-16 ch 4, | abuse*Snicker* well, it's not too bad ended like this, but I think one more chapter would be nice! |
| otter pop 2007-06-14 ch 3, | abusehaha. i really like this story, it's funny and well written... so yeah. i hope you update soon |