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| abba12 2007-07-28 ch 1,  | abusewow, i love this one! the imagry and connection. definitly one of your best |
| Alison Wright 2007-05-31 ch 1, | abuseGod almighty, this is freaking fantasic! Holy crap, how did you come up with this? This is insanely great. I love how one stanza you say "Bloody petals" then two stanzas down you say "one pulse in its own". I love how you combine two images of a person crying in the rain and a bleeding rose. Awesome work. Write on. L. W. |