beautifully written in every way i can think of. the way it's divided makes it easy to read, the story .. well, i HAD top finish it- and the ending, it was surprisingly satisfying. almost as satisfying as your i-want-to-beat-edward-cullen-with-a-stick affair, which was very inspiring indeed. =D

A truly amazing story... well-written, candid, frank, heartrending... the way you write is like poetry... keep up the good work! :)

style of writing was very good...i like you as an author..but i'm not really a fan of stories with 'betrayal' and 'unfaithfulness' in it coz it makes me really sad...i'm just too attached with those stuff...anyways, hope to read more of your stories...of course with happy endings on it..sorry if i'm being such a cornball...lol

This was a really good story! I enjoyed it a lot. You have amazing, vass vocabulary, and the plot itself was touching, and seemed so realistic.

I can't wait to read some of your other work.

that was written very well. i liked it a lot! keep on writing =)