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Reviews For: The Hall of Unsung Heroes

samwise606
2007-06-21
ch 1,
abuseI like it. I can definitely see the X-Men influence, with a handicapped but super-powerful leader, and a bunch of super people who aren't necessarily heroes with cool powers, but are just part of the school of gifted youngsters--or in this case, the hall of unsung heroes (loving the acronym, by the way). I liked the use of the word Lilliputian, and how you created invincium--a lot like adamantium. There were a lot of fun-sounding characters. Nice use of cliches--the bathroom window, and then the leader escaping somehow and the invincium metal absorbing everything except psychic energy. If you like superhero parodies full of humorous cliches, I recommend my "Adventures of Captain Plot Device". I hope to read more of this in the future.
--Samwise
jennifer
2007-06-05
ch 1, anon.
abuseThe story is too tedious to read and not funny at all. It seems so pointless.
Iced Tea Junkie
2007-06-05
ch 1,
abuseYeah, sorta. She was originally a combination of Jean Grey and Professor Xavier, but I made her ten times awesomer.
THIS IS A CUTE STORY!
2007-06-05
ch 3, anon.
abuseDoes Captain Capable look like Jean Grey, except in a wheelchair?
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