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| wishing.on.echoes 2007-06-13 ch 1,  | abuseI really liked this, I think sometimes the formatting took away from it, but usually it just added to what you were saying and made it seem more... raw. What really threw me off was this bit: (a) 2 3 L L I didn't realize it was supposed to say all until about the third time I read it. And just some grammar things but you may've done those on purpose. I really am quite fond of this though, probably one of my favourite things I've read. |
| Jasrey Blue 2007-06-01 ch 1, | abuseI realy like the way you do this with the format and everything. I made it seem alive. |