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| M. Edmondson 2007-05-31 ch 1,  | abuseThe title of your poem doesn't really match the flow of it. Though that is just one little thing. Any way your poem was amazing. It was rapturous and truly esctasy. Your poem is the perfect example on how poetry should be. I don't think poetry should have a lable don't get the wrong message and no boundaries. Though some of the poems on here just suck and it's really hard to fined good poetry. I guess in my mind I've already posted poetry as a play of words. And I loved how you played with your words it was simply blissful. It actual looked like you took the time and effort on your poem to really get your message across. And that I sincerely appreciate. I appreciate as well as I admire your consideration of poetry. All I'm asking for from these other poets is a little bit of effort. Maybe I'm biased I don't know. Still great poem I;ll be reading more of your work Jessica so don't let me down. |