|Reviews for Mistakes|
| The Jynx of Kari 6/1/07 . chapter 1
There were a couple kinks in there [one was already pointed out] and it's simplistic rhythm got to me and I really liked it.
| All Alone With Her Thoughts 6/1/07 . chapter 1
Simple, yet beautiful. Great job - as always.
| re x invented 6/1/07 . chapter 1
this is cute, juvenile in a refresing kind of way. i'm sorry i didn't get to your page sooner, i've been kind of slack about that lately. but i'm glad i found your work. ]
| DarkBlysse 6/1/07 . chapter 1
"We know not why we do say them"-This line is worded really badly. Try to fix it up so it flows smoother. I had to read it about three times before I knew what it said.
"We say these some things"-Take 'some' out.
It's a good poem overall. Just a couple of mistakes. I liked the third stanza the most ('I've tried to love every brother')-I felt a lot of heart in it.
| SirScott 5/31/07 . chapter 1
Pretty good poem with a good message.
| Avali-San 5/31/07 . chapter 1
Oh, that was beautiful...
| Sun37Storm 5/31/07 . chapter 1
This is really good. It has a simple rhyme that delivers a message. Great job and keep writing!