There is truth in that last line, although it feels like the "it" that does not fit the rhyme should be the last word. Rhythm is not perfect but it's fast-moving, driving. The repetition works well enough to create a sort of surrealism. Pretty good job.

i liked this a lot :]
i especially loved the ending.
nice work!

Oh . . . this is simply wonderful. Clearly written, with unwavering prose. I like it! *_*