Very cool!

Hey Anna, this is a pretty good story, You makin another chapter I hope. XD

Your Bud

RJ

Oh! looks muchly good! *grin* I think I read the one before this but this is just as good, can't wait for the next chapter.

Bye

RW

YACS - Yet another curious story. ::))

This is really good.I love your descriptions. Your vocabulary is amazing. I enjoyed reading this very much, and I'm definitely adding it to my favs. i think you should continue to write this story. Please review my stuff! Update soon! Thank you!

You have a very definitive style, but don't be afraid to say what you want to say. Work on description and try to never use the term "vampire-cop" again, that's just silly :)