whoa that was very interesting i liked it :D

Aww! So sad...but I really do think that this should be in the site. And you keep putting Kagome instead of Ashley. That's just...not right for characterizing and changing names.

Um...okay. First off, the story is VERY good. Second, you were mixing up Kagome and Ashley. Plus, a story like this probably should be in the sister site of fictionpress. It should be in since it's an INUYASHA based story.

*growl* I hope he makes it out okay. Now Ashley has proof he loves her, he jumped in to save her.

oh!

i like i like!

i sortof get confused when ashley and kagome are sort of mixed up.

i love how he's portrayed as being quite cheeky.

cant wait for the next chapter.

aw

stupid amy..

funny how both female characters start with A

got confused when i read the story..

mayb it would b better to use names startin with different letters so its not as easy to become confused.

AW!

Wow amy is so mean!

i hope ashley isn't too mad at joey!

AW!

so cute!

she actually said yes!

:D

haha

lol

i thought she was going to smack him on the head for suggesting it...

but i like the fact that she agreed to go out with him... it makes your story way cuter!

:D

Interesting plot so far...

lets see the next chapter now shall we?

(yay! i dunt have to wait fer the next chapter)

Guess I was really wrong. Once bitten, twice shy; so now it would be twice bitten, quadruple shy. Good luck to Joey in trying to convince her that his love is real and he wasn't just using her. I don't whether I should like Amy because she made them come together or dislike her because she made Ashley hate Joey. Can't wait to see how he shows her.

UPDATE SOON!

Can you update as quick again? I love your plot so far. Can I assume Ashley won't know her dog Joey and her crush Joey are the same for a (relatively) long time and be right? Which language are the words like hanyou and kami?

UPDATE SOON!

LOL: Really good idea-I like it and I'll be looking out for it in the future.

D heya interesting plot and story time. I had thought that Any was his true love at first... but apparently not P, anyway, keep up with it! and i'll be waiting for the updates!