i usually have a v short attention span but this kept me hooked. love the blurriness between dream & reality, & nicely ended. ~Bex xx

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parody indeed, love it how you use the romantic settings of a summer's night at the beach and then turn it upside down...

stones. lol. typical of yours.
it's rly good. rather easy to read, but i like the contents.
lolstones.
and it rly feels like you rly let go off them

very nice! i like it. it's unique!! too many people write poems about love and other cliched themes, they get on my nerves sometimes. it's nice to read something different! keep writing!