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| Emily Autumn 2008-05-14 ch 2,  | abuseThis was really good...I gotta go to bed now, but I'll read more tomorrow. :] |
| LalaLolita 2008-02-05 ch 22, | abusefor the sequel -if you haven't already started it, i haven't looked- I think it should only be that riley starts cutting. i love the story completely, and I know that it doesn't have perfect details but I still picture them all and understand what's going on. this has inspired me to write a new story of my own, but completely different. the only thing I really want to use is the abusive parent. i'm checking your page now! |
| see-the-way 2008-02-02 ch 22, | abuseha, thats a great idea, because i loved this story! Im so sad that its over :( oh well. btw, i thought the sequels were a bit-well, not as good as this one! idk. anyways. |
| Rhythm.Of.My.Soul 2007-08-20 ch 3, | abusewow. GREAT CHAP |
| Rhythm.Of.My.Soul 2007-08-19 ch 2, | abusenice chapter |
| Rhythm.Of.My.Soul 2007-08-19 ch 1, | abuseGreat first chapter. I think I would be scared out of my mind if I come back to my room to see a guy. Well, if he was cute and didn't have a gun I think I'd be okay. |
| see-the-way 2007-07-15 ch 21, | abuseohh, so good. I think that the sequel should be A, Riley and Bailey's dad becomes an alchaholic. plus in the nezt story, you should bring Lucas and Riley's relationship to the next - or next 2 levels! keep it up, see-the-way |
| see-the-way 2007-07-15 ch 17, | abuseum...in ur A/N u said: I finally got Riley to tell Lucas how he felt about her. You just called Riley a him, and Lucas a her...right? anuways i like ur story so far, it has a few minor spelling and grammer mistakes, i suggest that when u write a chapter, u look over it to make sure it makes sence. |
| Jesuslightstheway 2007-07-04 ch 21, | abuseC all the way! haha. wow that was an amazing story. it took me 2 days to read b/c i wouldn't stop! i love the idea of a sequel. wow, you're a great writer! keep writing God Bless. |
| Erin 2007-07-03 ch 21, anon. | abusei think u shuld do a sequel. i think it should be a mix of both of them because u can deffinatly write a lot with those |
| april 2007-06-26 ch 21, anon. | abuseC? I like your novel its awesomeness =) |
| Mantar 2007-06-22 ch 21, | abusewell i dont really vote for either. neither is veyr happy. I dont like cutters. cutters are quitters. life is tough. Other people have it ten times tougher than any cutter does. that's my philosophy lets have it be like a love story with riley and lucas (my character.) lol nah, but no cutting or alchohol! why is that the only subject that any of you guys write about besides love stories and the elemental people? oh well, NOW TO THE NEXT STORY! PS i cant believe i finishde that IT WAS SO DANG LONG! |
| Mantar 2007-06-22 ch 20, | abuseyeah, coma patients just dont do that... lol. UGH STOP MAKING THESE CHAPTERS SO ADDICTING!! |
| Mantar 2007-06-22 ch 19, | abusei really have to stop reading these...i need to go to bed! |
| Mantar 2007-06-22 ch 18, | abusegasp~!~!!~~!~!!~ Ok, i have to go downstairs and play half life 2 before i get too wrapped up in this thingammajig. otherwise ill be here for the next 5 horus reading this and the next story. so Ya. good chap though |