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| MD 2007-06-28 ch 2, anon. | abuseHey! Your story shows alot of promise! Your humor is just right without it becoming lame. The only thing I think you should notice are spelling mistakes. But otherwise, it's great. Update! I'll be watching. :) -MD |
| Anti-Socialite 2007-06-01 ch 1, | abuseWell I liked it a lot. I thought it was cute and funny. Totally willing to read more. |