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Reviews For: Bellum Gothicum

Katherine A. Rossetti 2007-07-30 ch 7,	abuse“Sweet, dearest, wonderful, adorable, and completely defenseless lackey? That line = me laughing my ** off for a good five minutes. I LOVE Dreau. She is one of the best characters I have ever read. She calls hazel the most hilarious things, ex: "germ" and "twit". The humor in this chapter is making it one of my fav. stories on fiction press. Good job!
Rizzy 2007-07-23 ch 6,	abuse:D I cant take you enough for taking the time to read one of my stories. I'm here to return the favor! haha I love this story so far. I couldn't read pass one chapter without laughing. Definitely hilarious!
Faster-than-without-water 2007-07-18 ch 7,	abuseI do feel a surge of excitement at the thought of another chapter in the near future. I liked this chapter a lot, especially Eli's nose which has thus far proven to be a source of endless amusement for me. Someone really should host an expedition in it, I'm sure they'd find lots of interesting things. There wasn't anything I really disliked, but I'll check again to be sure... nope, nothing.
The Business of Misery 2007-07-17 ch 1,	abuseWell, lol (I guess I should put that, since I did Laugh Out Loud [and earned a stare from my brother]) Me and my friends (most of us) agree that 'silly humans never get things right'. From the not-quite-human-human(who spends too much time writing on the computer), Chloe/Architect's Sidekick
Katherine A. Rossetti 2007-07-02 ch 6,	abuseI saw this story a couple of days ago and wanted to read it, but then I got distracted by something but I'm really glad I remembered it and came back because this is hilarious! My favorite is when Dreau would make these long speeches to Hazel and Hazel would have no idea what she was saying because of the accent. I also agree with Mephistophelian, it is similar to Terry Pratchett( thats good because I love him), but still different in a really awesome way. I enjoyed reading this and I hope you update soon!
Evan Cullen 2007-06-28 ch 6,	abuseI love your writing style. I put it somewhere between Douglas Adams and Lemony Snicket. Keep up the work. Oh, and on a grammar note: you may want to change "Hazel would have rubbed her eyes to be sure, but they were weighed down with plastic bags of supplies" to "...but her hands were weighed down..." The way it's written, it sounds like her eyes are holding bags. Not a major thing, just something I noticed
Evan Cullen 2007-06-28 ch 4,	abuseLove it.
The Paranoia Kids 2007-06-28 ch 6,	abuseI love your story! Hazel's such a big joke! Omg. I love it. Update soon!
Faster-than-without-water 2007-06-27 ch 6,	abusethat was a great update. I love the part about Hazel wanting to poke Eel Eye's nose.
CamouflageRoses666 2007-06-26 ch 5, anon.	abuseAll I can say is holy crap! This story is really great. The summary and prologue really caught my interest. I can't wait to see what you have in store for the next chapter. :)
Mephistophelian 2007-06-02 ch 3,	abusewow...just wow. I have to say, this is the best thing I've read on fictionpress in a long, long time. Your summary caught me right off, and your writing style reminds me of Terry Pratchett, or Christopher Moore, two writers that are both great. I can't wait to find out where this story is going. I had more to say, but I forgot it all. I'm adding this one to my favorates! -Mephistophelian
Ammom 2007-06-01 ch 2,	abuseIt was an interesting first chapter, though the ending was a little sudden.
Ammom 2007-06-01 ch 1,	abuseI like the intro, and I like how you took historical factors into this. The description caught my interest, and I am curious to see where this goes. :)

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