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| Taltush/MeiMei 2007-06-01 ch 1,  | abuseThere's something intriguing about this story, even if it's a bit too vague and confusing to be completely figured out. It has a touch of flutter (sort of over-done elegance, if that makes sense), but the result is actually a good one. It's both pretty and blunt. I'm honestly a bit curious as to what you meant by this. It's not quite mystery, nor exactly fantasy. I'm really curious to understand everything. I think that if you expanded this into a longer story, it would make a lot more sense, but it's still good like this. |
| Jasrey Blue 2007-06-01 ch 1, | abuseA little confused but I really do like it. |