Slow as I am, I couldn't quite grasp the logic of this at first glance. I found this positively intriguing, and actually liked the way you kept in short in general. Good work.

simply waking up, don't we all want to go back to dreaming?

good haiku

keep writing

really touches my heart:)- it seems so true though... nice job!

This is a really intriguing poem and I know I'm probably going to be thinking about this for a while to try to figure out what it means. Well-written; nice job.

most people, yes...

nice...

A very well put together Haiku. I will be honest in saying that I re-read this poem several times trying to pin point exactly what connotations this poem can have. But the wording is so well put together and the possibilities far to diverse with the meaning that this poem could have that I must be honest in saying I can't decide on one single possibility. But then, I believe that is what you were trying to achieve? Though I might be totally off the mark mind you. At any rate, I really enjoyed this poem. Good stuff. Hope your vacation is going well!

Cheers

Lost in A World of Pain

Beautiful metaphor, it's so painfully true... Lovely haiku.

PQ

Wow, this brought back memories. Just...I don't know, I can just relate. Great job.

Lol. Funny and beautifully written.