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| Mia Nicole 2007-07-02 ch 1,   | This song is really emotional/raw, and I like that. I can relate to your feelings in it. Overall, it's really good, and pretty cool :) Keep Writing, mia |
| DemonicTruths 2007-06-26 ch 1, | I like it. Letting go is always so hard and you explain it very well. Good job. -DemonicTruths |
| kloun mannequin 2007-06-22 ch 1, | a little dark, but I liked this song by the way. I got a raw feeling. |
| twilightwolf666 2007-06-11 ch 1, | hmm? Problem, Its still early so I lack the intellegence to make any sense of this. I liked it, yes, definatly liked it, but i didnt understand it. I plan on re-reading it when I wake up from global next block ^ ^ -Twilight Wolf |
| flies.like.decay. 2007-06-02 ch 1, | I still think you listen to too much Evanescene and OMIGOD, I GOT A BETA! I'm so happy. Now all I have to do is send them my poetry, wait for them to correct it/send it back, and then I can post it. Short and painless, huh? But yes. Except for the fact that it was incomplete (period.at.end.) this was pretty good. I found something better for my soul than coffee. French Vanilla cappuccino. Delicious. But anyhow. Have a nice day. I'm going to go share the joy with other unfortunate writers. |
| Julian Toepfer 2007-06-02 ch 1, | Powerful stuff. I love the repetition of certain words as it really creates a powerful image. Great work. |
| Marbur 2007-06-01 ch 1, | All I can say is wow. (Its hard to really say anything else, not sure I could) |
| The Simple 2007-06-01 ch 1, | awesome. VERY driven. i can definitely relate to how you're feeling right now. |
| Ashelin 2007-06-01 ch 1, | There is a TON of feeling in this song. It is so relatable and emotional. I love it. The reader can really sense your feelings. Wonderful job! |