This song is really emotional/raw, and I like that.

I can relate to your feelings in it. Overall, it's really good, and pretty cool :)

Keep Writing,
mia

I like it. Letting go is always so hard and you explain it very well. Good job.

-DemonicTruths

a little dark, but I liked this song by the way. I got a raw feeling.

hmm? Problem, Its still early so I lack the intellegence to make any sense of this. I liked it, yes, definatly liked it, but i didnt understand it. I plan on re-reading it when I wake up from global next block ^ ^


-Twilight Wolf

I still think you listen to too much Evanescene and OMIGOD, I GOT A BETA! I'm so happy. Now all I have to do is send them my poetry, wait for them to correct it/send it back, and then I can post it. Short and painless, huh? But yes. Except for the fact that it was incomplete (period.at.end.) this was pretty good. I found something better for my soul than coffee. French Vanilla cappuccino. Delicious. But anyhow. Have a nice day. I'm going to go share the joy with other unfortunate writers.

Powerful stuff. I love the repetition of certain words as it really creates a powerful image. Great work.

All I can say is wow. (Its hard to really say anything else, not sure I could)

awesome. VERY driven. i can definitely relate to how you're feeling right now.

There is a TON of feeling in this song. It is so relatable and emotional. I love it. The reader can really sense your feelings. Wonderful job!