STiLL KAWAii! will she get pregnant?

that was so sad

this is so sad! I almost cried! ;_;

PLEASE DEAR GOD RIGHT MORE! It's really really good. The love and the fear, the hatred and the devotion, and the physical parts all flawless. Your and excellent writer and please right more.

sad cant wait til next part

I'm sorry to be harsh but if you are going to write about something like incest than you should probably dig far deeper in to their mentality and their relationship. It doesn't seem so special that it would push them to commit incest and I thought the sister came off as a whiny baby rather than someone who can hold her own in something that is so taboo. The characters don't seem realistic and they keep calling each other "big brother" or "little sister" which I think is odd because wouldn't they want to forget that they are related?

Also, the supportive friends in this issue doesn't make sense because there are limits to most friendships no matter how deep they are.

All in all, I thought this story needed some serious tweaking and dialogue that was more meaningful than "I love you" as an explaination.