That's really good.

Wow. Amazing. I love the ending sentence- it really ties up the story! You know, it does snow in March in certain areas- like Iowa and other northern areas :)I really enjoyed it-
-EM

Wow, an extremely touching piece. In a few short paragraphs you describe not only a person but their life as well. You make the preson reading feel the sorrow of the narrator. Very beautifully written. It does credit to its subject.