Reviews for Challenge Twenty Five

Reviews For: Challenge Twenty Five - Reviews: Page 1 of 3

Pixie-gurl 2007-07-03 ch 4,	O: Nicole lynn B: Jane Ellecot M: Nikki Knight
Chiomi 2007-07-01 ch 11,	Originality: Henred5 Mechanics: Eowyn Greye Best: BlackCat
ylaenek 2007-07-01 ch 1,	M: BlackCat O: Henred5 B: Eowyn Greye
henred5 2007-07-01 ch 1,	Mechanics:- BlackCat Originality:- Nicole Lynn Best:- Eowyn Greye
henred5 2007-07-01 ch 11,	I enjoyed the whole end part "two years later." But I don't think the beginning drew me (the reader) in very well. Needs to be worked on more.
henred5 2007-07-01 ch 10,	HUGH?! I am confused...henred5 overloading
Elizabeth Anne Ensley 2007-06-30 ch 1,	The Infamous Vote (or vites, lol): —Mechanics—The one with the best grammar, punctuation, spelling, and flow. The best from a technical point of view. - The Dread Conversation By: Eowyn Greye —Originality—The most imaginative use of the required pieces. The best from a creative point of view. - Exhaustion Dulls Even The Most Sarcastic Cynic By: BlackCat I liked the way the elements fit together in this one. much as I despise first person tense. ;-) (Yes, now you know my horrible secret, lol) —Best—The overall best story; the best read. The best from a reader’s point of view. - Mesmerising Powers Of The Calling By: Henred5 The ending left me wondering what would happen next (which, I expect, was the purpose)/
Elizabeth Anne Ensley 2007-06-30 ch 7,	Very good. I have one nit. Nymphomaniac is gender-specific to females. I Googled and found out that satyr is the equivalent term for males. ;-)
Myriadragon 2007-06-28 ch 1,	Well. Sorry if some of my reviews were snarky...I'm tired and hungry. Anyway: Mech: BlackCat Orig: Henred5 Best: Eowyn Greye
Myriadragon 2007-06-28 ch 11,	Well, it's a little interesting, I guess, but I kind of wonder what the point was.
Myriadragon 2007-06-28 ch 10,	All I can say is...WTF?
Myriadragon 2007-06-28 ch 9,	Hm...not quite enough detail here to really make it work, but a good beginning.
Myriadragon 2007-06-28 ch 8,	Yay, Kris reappears! Not quite as good as some of the others, but then I think everybody's pretty burned out this month. Still amusing, though :)
Myriadragon 2007-06-28 ch 7,	giggles Love the last line. Though plenty of straight boys play with dolls--they just call them G.I.Joes. Anyway, an interesting story. I've been thinking a lot lately about pregnancy and the dynamics of mother, father, and child during gestation (Gods only know why--I'm too young for my biological clock to be complaining!), so this resonated with me.
Myriadragon 2007-06-28 ch 6,	A good idea, but rushed. Much more telling than showing, but I'm sure you're aware of that. I know how hard it can be to get a story out with real life demanding all your time.

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