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| aneman333 2008-05-26 ch 1,  | abuseSuch a sweet story; good job. |
| Oyoa 2007-12-18 ch 1, | abuseDarn it, I'm a sucker for romantic vampires... but then... I just love vampires overall... ah... *sighs* |
| ess3sandra 2007-11-22 ch 1, | abusedoes that mean he will come back? i cant get sublte even if it hit me square in the eye, =P. |
| Lily Llynn 2007-11-22 ch 1, | abuseIt's dark and depressing, but I love the hopefulness of the end. I've never been a lover of vampire fics (I do enjoy them now and then), but I liked this. (: The fantastic writing only made this even better. (: Creative and unique plot, and I'm glad somebody added it to the c2! (: |
| Rizzy 2007-07-27 ch 1, | abuseWow! I'm very impressed with how this turned out for a one-shot. Quinn is such a sweetheart :D I wish it was more than just a one-shot though haha |
| windcriesjimi 2007-06-14 ch 1, | abuseI think you should continue this story. You left it open so are you still debating it? |
| Albino Peacock 2007-06-03 ch 1, | abuseyay another vampire story! thanks for updating i was getting kind of depressed from the lack of voiddeliriumness i love you |
| Summer McAdams 2007-06-03 ch 1, | abuseThis story actually reminded me of Twilight. :D Goodness, Edward Cullens is someone to die-for. He's so unbearingly sweet! And insanely good-looking! :D |
| TheMysticalLollipop 2007-06-02 ch 1, | abuseVery good, very interesting. You have a way of managing to fit a whole story into either two pages or twenty--without the reader ever losing interest. This would make a very good prologue to a very interesting story! I hope you keep writing; I truly enjoy reading your work. |
| ShimoAneue 2007-06-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow... ;_; That was really good. I cried! Perfect comeback VD, kudos to you and your muse! |
| i_kiss_to_tell 2007-06-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseOMG! another great story!! you could definently go further with it but it was a sweet place to end :) it just kinda bothered me that you never really discribed April... (i really like the sound of toffee colored eyes!) |
| Faith Adeline 2007-06-01 ch 1, | abusethis is really good! I really liked it! Although, you could most certainly turn this into an actual story quite easily ;) hehe. Faith |
| Jennifer 2007-06-01 ch 1, anon. | abusewow i love this its awsome |
| Peachie Miss 2007-06-01 ch 1, | abuseAww, too bad it's a oneshot, it came out really nice. Thumbs up! |