"The light in your eyes. Gone.' Wow...that line captivated me :D

"River Dancer" Love it!

This was full of angst! Good work!

aah, very beautiful! Your description was very well :3
I wonder what your inspiration was, I'm always curious to that point.
Anyway, I like it enormously (yep yep, like, not likeD, because I still do ;D )

Lhune

Wauw..Where did that come from ^^? Very nice. Well done. I love the mystery and the rhythm of this!