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| The Reverse Edge Blade 2007-06-03 ch 1,   | This wasn't one of your best ones. There wasn't much happening in it, just two people talking, except that what they talked about had alot in it. I think this fic could've been longer, with more stuff happening in it, not just the talking. I liked the way you wrote it, but it should've been a little more things happening. Like her thoughts after he's left or something. Keep writing! The Reverse Edge Blade |