Reviews for ruler of the day - FictionPress.com

simpleplan13 2007-09-01 ch 1,	to big to listen to other... too big to listen to others I like this.. the repetition of the one stanza is great.. and I like how it goes from sometime to today.. great job
shinco 2007-08-22 ch 1,	HEY SHAZAAM! lol, I still call you that cause, ya know! lol Anyway, it's been forever since I've been on here! And I like this poem, it's pouring out your feelings and showing the person that thinks they're all that that they really aren't any better than anyone else. Cool! I only saw two errors- 1. 1st line, 3rd stanza, you said "your" instead of "you", 2. 1st word, 1st line, 4th stanza, lol, you spelled "too" "t-o". Am I being too critical? lol I hope not. You know I love ya, bud! GO SHAZAAM!
FunkyFlower17 2007-08-19 ch 1,	the rhetorical questions really make it flow well. and the determined tone of the last line is great. good work ;)
breezy nostrils 2007-06-03 ch 1,	i have had friends like this. and i know people like this. oh snobbery. i like the last stanza for some reason. probably just the flow and sound. nice work.