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| simpleplan13 2007-09-01 ch 1, | abuseAn ancient disciple of matters inevitable grip.. matter's I like this piece a lot.. putting sacrifice on its own line was awesome. and I love the similes.. "hungry like an animal, pathetic like a child" was a powerful line.. awesome job |
| The Un-great-ful 2007-06-02 ch 1, | abuse'I giggle my way through the hologram' - only your terrifyingly addled mind could conjure such a sickening diagram of events. I only hope you warp somebody's mind with this. It would be a shame not to. |