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simpleplan13
2007-09-01
ch 1,
abuseAn ancient disciple of matters inevitable grip.. matter's

I like this piece a lot.. putting sacrifice on its own line was awesome. and I love the similes.. "hungry like an animal, pathetic like a child" was a powerful line.. awesome job
The Un-great-ful
2007-06-02
ch 1,
abuse'I giggle my way through the hologram' - only your terrifyingly addled mind could conjure such a sickening diagram of events. I only hope you warp somebody's mind with this. It would be a shame not to.
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