Yay! Three cheers! -: Good poem till the end of the world!

So far, so good! -:

In the 4th line, is it ANGLES OR ANGELS? Be careful to proofread first! Nice message by the way!

Oh . . . in love eh? Update ASAP! -:

Cool imagery! -: Imagery at its BEST GORE!

Short yet sweet . . . good metaphor!

*You are hell talented, aren't you?*

keep updating!

i like this one better. you portrayed freedom as somewhat "pain-free" and as if you were cured or relieved from something. nice one.

i like this poem, you're right.. we have similarities with our themes.. let darkness give light!

btw, thanks for reviewing my work..

kudos..

What a unique prose . . . truly dark indeed. -:

True to the point . . . how well-written! -:

Soo dark and gothic . . . LOve it!

I like this one, it leaves an interesting air of mystery about it :)