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Reviews For: One Night Stand
Clandestiny 2007-06-02 . chapter 1
Interesting. Very interesting. The end was very unexpected, very very unexpected.

Very intriguing.
FeralEyes 2007-06-02 . chapter 1
Dang. Kind of angry. And deep...very deep.

Watch your tenses and pronouns. Every now and then you mix them up.

Lovely story hun..
very nice
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Keep it up.
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