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| Isca 2008-06-06 ch 1,  | abuse"Let me suffer the consequences of giving you wings." What a fabulous line! :) |
| XxXKristie marieXxX 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuseI so understand what your saying here! Being there for them and then they leave or break you b/c you fell in love. Horrible people ^_^ awsome poem! XKristie MarieX |
| HelpWanted11 2008-02-27 ch 1, | abuseOkay, I am so adding this to my faves. I really like the raw emotion and the voice that comes through in this piece. The last stanza is so passionate. Keep writing, HelpWanted11 |
| paper bell 2007-06-10 ch 1, | abuseNice work. I love the idea about giving the heart and wings. So pretty. Keep writing ` |
| Kissing Concrete 2007-06-05 ch 1, | abusewow- i really like it. shows really deep, raw emotion. |