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| theinfinitebee 2008-06-20 ch 1,  | abuseI love this poem with a passion, because I feel this way entirely too often. I've read this so many times, I swear I almost have it memorized. Brilliant. Pure brilliance. This is an amazing poem. I want to steal your muse, please. |
| Zeurpiet 2007-12-09 ch 1, | abuseI love this, especially the last three lines. As usual, your imagery and descriptions are amazing. Also, I like the way you portrayed your message without any crude terms and such. Great job!! |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-10 ch 1, | abuseWell written piece. Great job! ~Twilight Starr~ |
| fairytale failure 2007-09-26 ch 1, | abuseI'm trying really hard here to find some constructive criticism for you.. All that I can think of, is that I had to turn off my music to read your poetry. But that is really more of a compliment, because it means a)I was quite interested in your writing and b)you used such great vocabulary that I really had to focus on it. Actually, now that I think of it your phrasing was a little awkward in a few places; the second line, first stanza and the first line, third stanza. However, I can't think of how you would change them so it might just be that it has to be written that way. I love your imagery (but I'm sure you've heard that before) and I hope this is helpful. |
| the lost yarn spinner 2007-06-12 ch 1, | abuseSome people can't handle this? I had a complaint with GoaUL, and THAT is just kissing. Amazing imagery, as always. |
| mizu no kokoro 2007-06-07 ch 1, | abusei actually had to look up the word for your title =] sweet sounding. very vivid imagery. keep writing |