I love this poem with a passion, because I feel this way entirely too often. I've read this so many times, I swear I almost have it memorized.

Brilliant. Pure brilliance. This is an amazing poem.

I want to steal your muse, please.

I love this, especially the last three lines. As usual, your imagery and descriptions are amazing. Also, I like the way you portrayed your message without any crude terms and such. Great job!

Well written piece. Great job!

Twilight Starr

I'm trying really hard here to find some constructive criticism for you..

All that I can think of, is that I had to turn off my music to read your poetry. But that is really more of a compliment, because it means a)I was quite interested in your writing and b)you used such great vocabulary that I really had to focus on it. Actually, now that I think of it your phrasing was a little awkward in a few places; the second line, first stanza and the first line, third stanza. However, I can't think of how you would change them so it might just be that it has to be written that way. I love your imagery (but I'm sure you've heard that before) and I hope this is helpful.

Some people can't handle this? I had a complaint with GoaUL, and THAT is just kissing. Amazing imagery, as always.

i actually had to look up the word for your title ]

sweet sounding. very vivid imagery.

keep writing