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| LL (Not logged in) 2007-07-10 ch 4, anon. | abuseSo yeah. You should know who this is. LOVED IT! |
| Murphy's Lawyer 2007-06-16 ch 3,  | abuse*Yells and cheers and whistles* Woho! FINALLY! Way to leave us hanging though! - LL |
| lapixlili 2007-06-11 ch 1, | abusehey. i love the idea behind the story. u have some grammar issues though - u need to stick to one verb tense. u keep switching between past and present. while i understand that that could potentially be artistically on purpose, it doesn't seem to be, and it breaks up the story. |
| Murphy's Lawyer 2007-06-11 ch 2, | abuseOh me interested. Me very interested. Here's some brownies. Just because. I've made it the Unofficial Day to Hand Out Free Virtual Brownies to Writers Who Rock. - LL |
| lilred07 2007-06-05 ch 1, | abusei like! i like, i like, i like! update soon please. |
| Loopypants 2007-06-05 ch 1, anon. | abusethat's awsome! I hope to see the next chapter soon:) |
| Murphy's Lawyer 2007-06-03 ch 1, | abuseOh I like it. Mysterious, dark, and sexy. Woot! - LL |