So yeah. You should know who this is. LOVED IT!

*Yells and cheers and whistles* Woho!

FINALLY! Way to leave us hanging though!

- LL

hey. i love the idea behind the story. u have some grammar issues though - u need to stick to one verb tense. u keep switching between past and present. while i understand that that could potentially be artistically on purpose, it doesn't seem to be, and it breaks up the story.

Oh me interested. Me very interested. Here's some brownies. Just because. I've made it the Unofficial Day to Hand Out Free Virtual Brownies to Writers Who Rock.

- LL

i like! i like, i like, i like!

update soon please.

that's awsome! I hope to see the next chapter soon:)

Oh I like it. Mysterious, dark, and sexy. Woot!

- LL