I found this story intriguing. Not only does it display the character of today's high school students (As far as relationships.), it's also weaved in a very natural way that pulls us into your main character.

The only problem I had is when I came to your italicized work, it jars you out of the story a bit. I'm a little lost by this, but I'm sure It'll unfold as the story progresses. I'd love to see more chapters. Keep Writing!