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| Sly87 2007-08-23 ch 1,  | abuseJust found this...and let me say: it's really good...a bit short, but I still feel like I got your meaning clearly. Nicely done. |
| PocoSnow15 2007-06-22 ch 1, | abuseOh wow. Sounds like something I would write in bio when I was really depressed. Love me, take me, hate me, kill me. That sounds so cool. It's so short yet so powerful! Amazing again! I MUST GO READ MORE! |
| XxBlackChaosxX 2007-06-03 ch 1, | abuseYou have a talent for poetry, you really do, but I feel you're holding back when you write. I feel there's more you can do, but don't want to go that far. Whether it's uncertanty or laziness (No offense) I can tell you're holding back. I encourage you to write EVERYTHING you think of, instead of tidbits. This isn't a flame, it's meerly a bit of buddy-to-buddy advice. |
| Greenfire42 2007-06-02 ch 1, | abuseI think you should make it longer. There were times in the past where, I felt suicidle. |